帮忙看看英语文章有没有语法错误!感激不尽!Christmas Day falls on the twenty-fifth of December. It is a very happy day for many boys and girls.I can still remember the day last year I got the happiness feeling,because that day is my g

帮忙看看英语文章有没有语法错误!感激不尽!Christmas Day falls on the twenty-fifth of December. It is a very happy day for many boys and girls.I can still remember the day last year I got the happiness feeling,because that day is my g
帮忙看看英语文章有没有语法错误!感激不尽!
Christmas Day falls on the twenty-fifth of December. It is a very happy day for many boys and girls.I can still remember the day last year I got the happiness feeling,because that day is my girl friend to accompany me through.
That day,when I was waiting for her,a hand covered my eyes suddenly.I am not surprise,because I know she is a naughty girl.To my surprise,she dressed as an angel.I have never seen her so beautiful.At that moment ,I think my heart all belongs to her.
Then, wo walk to the movie theater hand in hand.We would go and see 《Daisy》.In the middle of the movie,she was as near crying as makes no difference.How lovely she is!hahaha……
On our way home,she whipped an apple out of her pocket.She told me that the apple shoule be eat at 0 a.m.At that time,her face as red as this apple,I dissolved into kiss her.
What a sweet Christmas Eve!What a memorable night!
She told me,’’I will is waiting for you, not only are you the people’s own army,but also my personal hero.’’I was profoundly touched.Yes,I can’t keep her company for everyday,but,I can treasure her,I can tell you attentively,I love her!Believe me,I will try my best to give you the happiness life!

帮忙看看英语文章有没有语法错误!感激不尽!Christmas Day falls on the twenty-fifth of December. It is a very happy day for many boys and girls.I can still remember the day last year I got the happiness feeling,because that day is my g
1、because that day was my girlfriend to.（第一段第二行）
2、I was not surprised,because I knew she is a...（第二段第一行）
3、I had never seen her so pretty before（第二段第二行）
4、at that moment,I thought my heart belongs to her（第二段最后一句）
5、then we walked to the movie(第三段开头)
6、she told me that the apple should be eaten at.（第四段）
7、her face was as red as the apple（第四段）
8、I will try my best to give you happiness and pleasure!（最后一句）
Christmas is almost upon us again,happy forever!

am not surprise改为was not surprised
know 改为knew
have改为had
think改为thought
her face 后面加一个was
能力有限只能有这些了

如果有能力还是要用一些从句，体现自己的语法能力。这是一篇建议或提倡体育另外，写作的时候，文章里尽量不要一会儿you,一会儿we，要有一个人称上的

时态不对耶。。。。。过去式