作业帮英语作文,有没有高手帮我看看语法错误
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英语作文,有没有高手帮我看看语法错误
英语作文,有没有高手帮我看看语法错误
英语作文,有没有高手帮我看看语法错误
我把我修改好的部分直接写在下面了：
第一段：...there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime （单复数问题）
...the circumstances of an individual crime （单复数问题）
The relative of punishment and motivation 好像不太通
第二段：还是fixed punishments
in an effective way （要加an）
measuring penalties is much simpler and criminals cannot find any excuses to attempt to escape punishments
These people believe that once this is achieved,a stable society will be founded
第三段：
circumstances （单复数问题）
some people suffer from mental disabilities,so they are likely to commit a crime beyond their control
Sometimes,criminals do not decide to commit a crime,but they are influenced by circumstances and other people,and deeply regret their mistakes afterwards.
Many people also find the outcome of judgments unfair.This is not good for social development.
第四段：
In conclusion （不是on conclusion）
circumstances
Only through this can we hope to solve crime-related problems