英语作文,大意是要求归还高三体育课because time is nervous in grade three of high school,other teacher often occupy the P.E lesson.We think this is correct,because when we very hard,we need a lots of train and keep better state ,if your

英语作文,大意是要求归还高三体育课because time is nervous in grade three of high school,other teacher often occupy the P.E lesson.We think this is correct,because when we very hard,we need a lots of train and keep better state ,if your
英语作文,大意是要求归还高三体育课
because time is nervous in grade three of high school,other teacher often occupy the P.E lesson.We think this is correct,because when we very hard,we need a lots of train and keep better state ,if your body don not good,you cannot better study.Because body is very important ,at last,we strong demand headmaster return P.E lessons.
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英语作文,大意是要求归还高三体育课because time is nervous in grade three of high school,other teacher often occupy the P.E lesson.We think this is correct,because when we very hard,we need a lots of train and keep better state ,if your
We are Senior Three students now,and we're always in a nervous and high pressure condition.However,we haven't enough time to relax and even are lack of sleep and sports.We have P.E lesson but it just performs practically no function because some of our teachers like to occupy P.E lesson.Even though our time is limited and we also need a lot of education and keep hard working,sports and relax are still playing an important role in students' life.It is said that strike a proper balance between work and rest.So that no matter how hard we students learn,we still hold the right of having the phisical education in order to help us relax and become more healthier.We are strongly hoping that headmaster can understand and support us.

because time is nervous in grade three of high school,other teacher often occupy the P.E lesson.
时间紧 time is intense, nervous是人的精神紧张。
other teacher== other teachers.
We think this is corre...

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because time is nervous in grade three of high school,other teacher often occupy the P.E lesson.
时间紧 time is intense, nervous是人的精神紧张。
other teacher== other teachers.
We think this is correct,because when we very hard,we need a lots of train and keep better state ,if your body don not good, you cannot better study.
We think this is correct,你认为这是对的？
we think that this is not correct
because when we very hard, because 后面要跟从句 ，你的句子里没有动词
because we study very hard
we need a lots of train and keep better state.想说我们需要锻炼并保持身体状态吗？
train是指训练 并不准确的说锻炼 better state并不能体现身体状态
we need to keep our fitness by taking certain exercise.
if your body don not good, you cannot better study. 没有don这个词
想说身体不好的话不能用直接说body do not good。可以说 如果不健康的话 没法好好学习
if we are not healthy, we cannot study better.
Because body is very important ,at last,we strong demand headmaster return P.E lessons.
body改成health更好 strong 是形容词 不能用来修饰动词
demand sb to do sth
we strongly demand the headmaster to return the P.E lessons
这些是语言上的一些问题 还有一些是中式英语的问题
一下是我的建议 你参考一下吧
The competition is very intense in Grade three in high school. The P.E class is always occupied by other subjects. We don't think this is correct. Although we need to spend more time on studying, we also need to keep our fitness to support the hard works. Therefore, we strongly demand that the P.E classes should not be replaced any more。

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