英文作文纠错This news mainly reported in New York taxi driver uplift the customer's car price madly. Now the New York Taxi Commission has launched an investigation of this incident. When I saw this news, this incident shocked me. This incident

英文作文纠错This news mainly reported in New York taxi driver uplift the customer's car price madly. Now the New York Taxi Commission has launched an investigation of this incident. When I saw this news, this incident shocked me. This incident
英文作文纠错
This news mainly reported in New York taxi driver uplift the customer's car price madly. Now the New York Taxi Commission has launched an investigation of this incident. When I saw this news, this incident shocked me. This incident showed me the greed of the human. The desires of feart is indeed infinite, not only American, but also the Chinese. There are many inequities in China, consumers are often deceived by others in the market. Every Chinese person want to make a lot of money, to become rich.
Of course, similar to the taxi driver elevation the fare, China is also often have this situation. Whenever Tomb Sweeping Festival, the Spring Festival and so many very important festival, This time, traffic is very much, In order to get more profits, the taxi driver will elevation the fee Together.
As the gap between rich and poor, some businessmen will often deceive consumers. For example, in China's shopping malls, if there are someone who unlike native, the owner of shop will sell merchandise with high-priced. If foreigners come to China to shop, they do not like to bargain, shop assistants will sell things as three times price. But if they are knowledgeable people, they will not be cheated.
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英文作文纠错This news mainly reported in New York taxi driver uplift the customer's car price madly. Now the New York Taxi Commission has launched an investigation of this incident. When I saw this news, this incident shocked me. This incident
This news mainly talks about taxi driver in New York recently uplifted the price madly.Now the New York Taxi Commission has launched an investigation of this incident.When I saw this news,it shocked me.It showed me the greed of the humans.It is the same in China.Almost every year when the big festivals arrive,the traffic companies will raise their ticket fares.
The desires of heart is indeed endless.Not only the Americans but also the Chinese sometimes are greedy.There are many inequities in China,consumers are often deceived by the greedy sellers in the market.All Chinese people want to make a lot of money and become rich.
As the gap between the rich and the poor continues to expand,this situation turns even worse.In some shopping malls,if there are someone who unlike native,the owner of shop will sell products at a high price.If foreigners come to China to shop and they do not bargain,shop assistants will sell things at three times the original prices.But if they are knowledgeable people,they will not be cheated.
最后一段的第二句话,unlike native不知道你在说什么.没有改.
另外一个问题是你的逻辑,我把原来你的第一第二段重新整理了一下.但现在整篇还是不够有逻辑,你每一段要写什么,前后有没有罗嗦重复颠来倒去,这都是要考虑的.
你这篇类似于小论文了.那么就要观点、现象、结论明明确确的.