这几句英文哪些错误的地方?Dear EditorCan you help me?My mum is cruel with me and I couldn't stand her any longer.She shouts at me and force me to study all the time without some rest.The worst thing that happens to me is that she beats me

这几句英文哪些错误的地方?Dear EditorCan you help me?My mum is cruel with me and I couldn't stand her any longer.She shouts at me and force me to study all the time without some rest.The worst thing that happens to me is that she beats me
这几句英文哪些错误的地方?
Dear Editor
Can you help me?My mum is cruel with me and I couldn't stand her any longer.She shouts at me and force me to study all the time without some rest.The worst thing that happens to me is that she beats me with anything,his hands,feet shoes and a broom,I still remember once she pulled lots of hairs off my head.I am stressed everyday and feel helpless.How should I do with such a mum?Looking forward to your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
这是书上的改错题哈

这几句英文哪些错误的地方?Dear EditorCan you help me?My mum is cruel with me and I couldn't stand her any longer.She shouts at me and force me to study all the time without some rest.The worst thing that happens to me is that she beats me
his hands,feet shoes and a broom- her hands, feet, shoes and broom
your mum is a she/her not he/him
How should I do with such a mum?- what should i do with a mum like this?

without any rest
her hands
根本就不通嘛，谁写的啊

forces, some rest-any rest, his hands-her hands, feet shoes-feet, 格式也要修改一下的,注意空格.

注意时态

without some rest
改 without any rest
force me
改forces me
The worst thing that happens to me is
改 The worst thing that has happened to me
因为已经发生了,所以用现在完成时比较好
she beat...

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without some rest
改 without any rest
force me
改forces me
The worst thing that happens to me is
改 The worst thing that has happened to me
因为已经发生了,所以用现在完成时比较好
she beats me with anything
改 she once beat me for nothing
你上面已经说了是"最严重的一件事" 现在用BEATS一般式就有问题. anything在否定句中可用,在肯定句中就指所有事了.
这里用NOTHING 表示她有此居然无缘无故打我
如果你想强调她经常这样打你,就不能用The worst thing that happens to me
,his hands,feet shoes and a broom
逗号去掉后面加with her hands,feet,shoes and a broom
lots of hairs
hair是不可数
I am stressed
改 i am stressful 应该用形容词

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Dear Editor
Can you help me?My mum is cruel with me and I couldn't stand her any longer.She shouts at me and (force改为forces) me to study all the time without (some改为any) rest. The worst thing (去掉...

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Dear Editor
Can you help me?My mum is cruel with me and I couldn't stand her any longer.She shouts at me and (force改为forces) me to study all the time without (some改为any) rest. The worst thing (去掉that) (happens改为happened) to me is that she beats me with anything,his hands,(去掉feet) shoes (改and为or) a broom,I still remember once she pulled lots of hairs off my head.I am stressed everyday and feel helpless.How should I do with such a mum?Looking forward to your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Ping

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