谁帮我写篇关于旅游的英语短文要求就是要写自己去过一个最有名的名胜古迹,还有旅游的益处就行了,还有要具体写一下旅游的益处。能开阔眼界什么的。这个没写具体。

谁帮我写篇关于旅游的英语短文要求就是要写自己去过一个最有名的名胜古迹,还有旅游的益处就行了,还有要具体写一下旅游的益处。能开阔眼界什么的。这个没写具体。
谁帮我写篇关于旅游的英语短文
要求就是要写自己去过一个最有名的名胜古迹,还有旅游的益处就行了,
还有要具体写一下旅游的益处。能开阔眼界什么的。这个没写具体。

谁帮我写篇关于旅游的英语短文要求就是要写自己去过一个最有名的名胜古迹,还有旅游的益处就行了,还有要具体写一下旅游的益处。能开阔眼界什么的。这个没写具体。
楼上语法错误不下二十个,虽然很浪费时间,但我还是改错好了,不然楼主用了就惨了：
I heard that Lijiang was a very beautiful city when I was young. I travelled there in a holidy with my parents.I went there by plane. I saw there were many moutains when I got out the plane. The air was fresh.We went to the Lijiang Gucheng the fist day, and we bought some interesting things and had a good meal in the Lijiang Gucheng. On the second day ,we went to the Yulong snowy moutain, it was beautiful, and it was my first time I had seen the snow. I played with the snow happily. My father told me that Yulong snow moutain was a famous place in China, many people came here every year. I was happy throughout this trip, because it was even better to that of Beijing!

Travel in Lijiang
I heard Lijiang is a very beautiful city when I was young. I travel there in a holidy with my parents.I went there plane. I saw there were many moutain when I got out the plane....

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Travel in Lijiang
I heard Lijiang is a very beautiful city when I was young. I travel there in a holidy with my parents.I went there plane. I saw there were many moutain when I got out the plane. The air was fresh.We went to the Lijiang Gucehng the fist day, we bought some intresting things and had a good meal in the Lijiang Gucheng. The second day ,we went to the Yulong snow moutain, it's beautiful, and it's my first time see the snow. I played with the snow happily. My father told me that Yulong snow moutain is a famous place in China, many people came here every year. I was happy in this trip, even like there better than Beijing!

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