求帮修改一下这篇英语日记,Once a year,a festival is held on August 15 by lunar calendar--it is mid-autumn day.It is a wet mid-autumn in this year .After lunch,I take a rest and went to sleep soon.When I woke up at 3PM,I look out of the win

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求帮修改一下这篇英语日记,Once a year,a festival is held on August 15 by lunar calendar--it is mid-autumn day.It is a wet mid-autumn in this year .After lunch,I take a rest and went to sleep soon.When I woke up at 3PM,I look out of the win
求帮修改一下这篇英语日记,
Once a year,a festival is held on August 15 by lunar calendar--it is mid-autumn day.It is a wet mid-autumn in this year .After lunch,I take a rest and went to sleep soon.When I woke up at 3PM,I look out of the window,it was dark outside.'What a mid--autumn day!,'I thought,'We can't not enjoy the moon tonight,it is raining again!'towards evening,I was having dinner with my family,when it began to rain.It is usual a fine day on August 15 by lunar calendar,a wet mid--autumn day is rare.It is so different from a sunny mid--autumn day,but no less happy!

求帮修改一下这篇英语日记,Once a year,a festival is held on August 15 by lunar calendar--it is mid-autumn day.It is a wet mid-autumn in this year .After lunch,I take a rest and went to sleep soon.When I woke up at 3PM,I look out of the win
Mid-autumn day is on August 15 once a year.This time,it is a wet mid-autumn.I went to sleep after lunch until I woke up at 3PM.But it was dark and raining when i looked out of the window!"It is impossible to enjoy the moon tonight if the rain goes on!"I thought.As a result,the rain didn't stop when evening came.Although it was a pity to have dinners with my family without the moon,we were still happy!

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Once a year, a festival is held on August 15 by lunar calendar--it is Mid-Autumn Day. It is a wet mid-autumn in this year . After lunch, I took a rest and went to sleep. When I woke up at 3PM,I looked out of the window, and it was dark outside.'What a mid--autumn day!,'I thought,'We can't enjoy the moon tonight,it is raining again!' Towards the evening, I was having dinner with my family,when it began to rain. It is usually a fine day on August 15 by lunar calendar, a wet mid--autumn day is rare.It is so different from a sunny mid--autumn day, but nonetheless less happy!
这是不是来自书本, 还是你自己写的? 很多错处都很容易改哈哈

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可以啊!可是,我眼都花了,要是放大就好了!@!##$@*&

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