请检查这几篇英语短文 指出错误和原因Tuesday,July 24thToday was sunny.Hot weather!I went to swimning with my best friends.In the pool,there were many peopel.So kind of crowded.But we had good time.Then we to eat a lot of things.They we

请检查这几篇英语短文 指出错误和原因Tuesday,July 24thToday was sunny.Hot weather!I went to swimning with my best friends.In the pool,there were many peopel.So kind of crowded.But we had good time.Then we to eat a lot of things.They we
请检查这几篇英语短文 指出错误和原因
Tuesday,July 24th
Today was sunny.Hot weather!I went to swimning with my best friends.In the pool,there were many peopel.So kind of crowded.But we had good time.Then we to eat a lot of things.They were very delicious.I liked to eat the ice-cream.I ate tow.After delicious.I liked to eat the ice-cream.I ate tow.After delicious.I liked to eat the ice-cream.I ate tow.After delicious.I liked to eat the ice-cream.I ate tow.After
Tuesday,July 31st
Today was the summer of nine days.These days
playing very happy.Today,I had to be worked hard.
6:00 I got up,eat a bread,a bowl of milk.I wrote a
morning of the homework.I was hungry.I ate a bowl
of noodles they were awful.I watched TV,then
worked hard.From my mother,She cooked dinner
for me.Today,very happy day!
Tuesday,July 10th
Great weather!it was sunny and hot all day.
Today was the first day of our summer vacation.
All of us were very happy.Why?Because we have
tow months to do things we love to do.This made
me feel very happy.But,I had to do many homework.
They were kind of difficult and too many.I hoped
I have a good summer vacation.
Tuesday,July 17th
Today it rained so I went to the supermarke.
It was too crowded so i didn't really enjoy it.Then i got home at
ten o'clockThen I cleaned my room.
That made me feel very tired.After that.I did my
homework.It was kind of difficult.And in the after-
noon,I played pingpong with my friends.It was very
exciting.I liked to play pingpong very much.
另外还想问个问题 英语写日记时什么时候用一般式而不用过去式
如 看到的什么用一般式
虽然有点麻烦请大家仔细点!

请检查这几篇英语短文 指出错误和原因Tuesday,July 24thToday was sunny.Hot weather!I went to swimning with my best friends.In the pool,there were many peopel.So kind of crowded.But we had good time.Then we to eat a lot of things.They we
1.首先,所有表示天气的应该用一般现在时
2.第一篇文章
“had good time”——改成——“had a good time" 习惯用语表达
“Then we to eat a lot of things”在to前面加上went.
"I liked to eat the ice-cream" 我喜欢吃冰淇淋是陈述一个事实,应该用一般现在时.
3.第二篇文章
"Today was the summer of nine days"是陈述事实,应该用一般现在时
“These days playing very happy.”上面是讲这一天,现在又说这些天,前后矛盾.
"I had to be worked hard."--改成--"I had to work hard."
哎,我没办法帮你全部改完,你错的地方太多了,不当面说的话很难说清楚,你还是向你老师请教吧!

Tuesday,July 24th
Today is sunny.It's very a hot day! I went to swim with my best friends.In the pool,there were many peopel.So kind of crowded.But we had good time.Then we went to eat a lot of t...

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Tuesday,July 24th
Today is sunny.It's very a hot day! I went to swim with my best friends.In the pool,there were many peopel.So kind of crowded.But we had good time.Then we went to eat a lot of things.They were very delicious.I liked to eat the ice-cream.I ate two.
Tuesday,July 31st
Today is the ninth day of summer begining .These days I
played very happy.Today, I had to be worked hard.
I got up at 6:00, eat a bread, a bowl of milk.I did for a whole morning.Then I was hungry.I ate a bowl of noodles, it was awful.I watched TV, then worked hard. My mother cooked dinner for me.Today, a very happy day! !
Tuesday,July 10th
Great weather! It is sunny and hot all day.
Today is the first day of our summer vacation.
All of us were very happy.Why? Because we will have
two months to do things we love to do.This made
me feel very happy.But,I had to do many homework.
They were kind of difficult and too many.I hoped
I have a good summer vacation.
Tuesday,July 17th
Today it rainy so I went to the supermarket.
It was too crowded so i didn't really enjoy it.Then i got home at
ten o'clock.I cleaned my room.That made me feel very tired.After that,I did my homework.It was difficult.And in the afternoon, I played pingpong with my friends.It was very exciting.I liked to play pingpong very much.
写英文日记记事的时候通常用一般过去式，当描述当天的天气的时候最好用一般现在时。还有一个建议：不要总用then，按顺序写下发生的事情就可以，读得人就会知道是接下来发生的事了。

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这需要做老师的来改

你错的好多哦,要一一改出来很难!
写英文日记记事的时候通常用一般过去式