Sat作文题批改一下把Mahatma Ganhdi Nelson Mandela Xun Lu "Once our society steps into a situation that everybody only cares about themselves ,we are facing a debacle that all the humankind fall into animals and eat each other."s

Sat作文题批改一下把Mahatma Ganhdi Nelson Mandela Xun Lu "Once our society steps into a situation that everybody only cares about themselves ,we are facing a debacle that all the humankind fall into animals and eat each other."s
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Mahatma Ganhdi 
Nelson Mandela 
Xun Lu 
"Once our society steps into a situation that everybody only cares about themselves ,we are facing a debacle that all the humankind fall into animals and eat each other."said by a famous Chinese patriot Xun Lu .As a part of our society ,we can not just only consider about things that affect us but also the thing that will influence the world that we live in.Helping our society is a way to improve our lives; saving our nation is a way to sublime our soul ; helping others leads us towards happiness.
With the pace of improvement of our nation,China,more and more people enjoy the modernized facilities like the television ,computer,massage chair and so on.It is all because China as a nation has gained numerous profit by industrialize the whole country.As a single part of our nation,our family feels the extremely enjoyment through help our nation and taste the sweetness of what China has given us.10 years ago I remember clearly that our family is extremely poor and I only get 1dollar a day to buy the snack I want.But ,to our surprise,my father encounter a opportunity to set up a company.In the process of build up a company,my father helped numerous people to get jobs and by this way he gained not only the fame but also the high profit.Now I get a opportunity to study abroad and I would not forget the instance of my father to help the nation in need and to prove it does worth.
Saving the endangered nation does sublime one's soul.Mahatma Ganhdi ,a great spirit leader of Indian ,saving the whole Indian through his Lead of mass civil disobedience free the whole Indian out of British rule.As the president of Indian national congress,Ganhdi help numerous people through supporting women right,fighting poverty and educating the whole adolescence.Although ,according to British,Ganhdi was indicted for treason and stayed in prison not only in India but also in South Africa for years .His great soul inspired numerous Indian and other people who were suffering to fight for the freedom.Any person can learn something from his whether it is devotion or the patriotism .His spirit does sublime due to the great affair he had done.
In this lecture we have know that helping our nation is helping ourselves and that our soul get purified by take the responsibility of our country.After all a person worth a little,a bunch of people deserves the world.

Sat作文题批改一下把Mahatma Ganhdi Nelson Mandela Xun Lu "Once our society steps into a situation that everybody only cares about themselves ,we are facing a debacle that all the humankind fall into animals and eat each other."s
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