Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The friends that you can have fun with is more important than the friends that you can get help from?Friendship!Who doesn't want friendship?But the bigger question is that what kind of friend peop

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The friends that you can have fun with is more important than the friends that you can get help from?Friendship!Who doesn't want friendship?But the bigger question is that what kind of friend peop
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The friends that
you can have fun with is more important than the friends that you can
get help from?
Friendship!Who doesn't want friendship?But the bigger question is that what kind of friend people would like to have.
It seems like a dilemma to make choice between the person you have fun with and
the person you can get help from.As for me,I side with the former.
To begin with,the first step to make friends
is having fun together.When asked about how you encountered your best friend,
such may occurred in your mind as a comfortable conversation,a relaxing trip
or a meal having together.It seems that having fun together is always the
start of friendship.
Having fun together is not only more
important at the beginning of friendship,it is also matters a lot about the
development of the friendship.
Moreover,friendship should keep as pure as
possible.Assume that there is person that you completely do not enjoy getting
along with,but he or she is of great help of you,will you treat such a person
as your friend?Probably no.Such a person may be more reasonably regarded as a
partner but not friend because friendship is always pure and is not established
on the standard of mutual help.
In addition,friendship establishing on
common sharing lasts longer than on mutual help.To be specific,people have to face different
problems during different periods in their life time.As students,people
borrow an eraser to them can be a helpful person to them; While they grow up
and begin to work,people can assist them with their work is of help to them.
It is obvious to see that when their needs changes,they need different helps
and therefore their friends,if their friendship established only on mutual
help,changes.On the contrary,people will never want to lose a friend can
share happiness together as such friends always keep you enjoy your life
whatever changes happen.Thus,their friendship last much longer.
Admittedly,friends can get help from are
important in some cases such as when people are lonely,poor or weak.But it is
still too weak to strengthen the viewpoint that friends you can get help from
are more important when considering the advantages of friends you can have fun
with.As is mentioned above,it can be treated as a wiser choice to make
friends with common shares for the reason that having fun together is the first
step to make friends and it will serve a guide to help you find your true andlife-long friends.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The friends that you can have fun with is more important than the friends that you can get help from?Friendship!Who doesn't want friendship?But the bigger question is that what kind of friend peop
有这么几个问题：
1.dilemma 这个词太抽象,应该有具体解释.否则我会问,你怎么知道这个问题不好选择啊.
2.It seems that having fun together is always the start of friendship.is not only more
important 这些表达是不是太绝对化了?
3.pure.你对pure的定义是什么?
4.结尾那个让步段,不应该说选择helpful的朋友有坏处,而应该说有人认为选择have fun with的朋友有坏处,然后你接着反驳掉.
总结：1.不够具体 2.语法错误
加油了!

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