请英语高手帮我仔细看下自己写的英语作文有没有什么语法、时态、单词等错误,虚心求教哎Thank my parents for giving my life.They're so diligent that them keep on working all day long in order to make a living.And they

请英语高手帮我仔细看下自己写的英语作文有没有什么语法、时态、单词等错误,虚心求教哎Thank my parents for giving my life.They're so diligent that them keep on working all day long in order to make a living.And they
请英语高手帮我仔细看下自己写的英语作文有没有什么语法、时态、单词等错误,虚心求教哎
Thank my parents for giving my life.They're so diligent that them keep on working all day long in order to make a living.And they're so selfless that them always keep all good things for me.Parents have made all they can do to help me grow.
With a grateful heart to treat their parents with a sincere heart to go with their parents,not to be taken for granted that parents do anything to help us,they took us to this beautiful world,is great enough,and our parenting adults,not asking for anything,we have to pay for silence,we stop blindly to demand their pay,Thanksgiving it,thank parents for their bit by bit.
When I am happy,they would share my happiness with me,my parents are the people who love me best,so I have no excuse not to love them.
I will try my best,I want to see the smile in their eyes.I love them forever

请英语高手帮我仔细看下自己写的英语作文有没有什么语法、时态、单词等错误,虚心求教哎Thank my parents for giving my life.They're so diligent that them keep on working all day long in order to make a living.And they
明显是百度翻的,很不靠谱啊,这是我改的I appreciate my parents for giving my life.They're so diligent that them keep on working all day long in order to make a living.And they're so selfless that them always keep all the good things for me.Parents have tried all they can do to help me grow.
We should treat our parents with a sincere and grateful heart to go with our parents,but not take for granted that parents do everything to help us since they took us to this beautiful world and this is great enough,however ,our parents ask us for nothing.We have to pay for silence and stop continuously demanding their pay,be thankful for it,repay our parents bit by bit.
When I am happy,they would share my happiness with me,my parents are the people who love me best,so I have no excuse not to love them.
I will try my best,because I want to see the smile in their eyes.I love them forever

they're so selfless that they always
It is enough great that they took us to this beautiful world and they never ask for anything.这句的语序完全不对，这是我给你调整改过的

意思到了，总觉的怪怪的。你自己多读一次，看看通顺不？

有一些小错误，改如下：
I would like to thank my parents, they gave me life .They're work so hard （diligent用词不当）that they keep on working all day long .And they're so selfless that they（that后面要加一个句子，句子的主语用主格t...

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有一些小错误，改如下：
I would like to thank my parents, they gave me life .They're work so hard （diligent用词不当）that they keep on working all day long .And they're so selfless that they（that后面要加一个句子，句子的主语用主格they） always keep all good things for me.Parents have made all they can do to help me grow up.

With a grateful heart to treat their parents with a sincere heart to go with their parents, not to be taken for granted that parents do anything to help us, they took us to this beautiful world, is great enough, and our parenting adults, not asking for anything, we have to pay for silence, we stop blindly to demand their pay, Thanksgiving it, thank parents for their bit by bit.有几个地方看不懂。

When I am happy, they would share my happiness with me, my parents are the people who love me best, so I have to love them。
I will try my best to return my parents（尽力回报父母）,I want to see the smile face .I love them forever。

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Thank my parents for giving me life.They're so diligent that they keep on working all day long so as to make a living. Selfless as they are, they always keep all good things for me and have done all...

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Thank my parents for giving me life.They're so diligent that they keep on working all day long so as to make a living. Selfless as they are, they always keep all good things for me and have done all they can do to help me grow.
这位同学，后面的改动需要很大。前面是我的父母，后面怎么又变成他们了？你是不是用有道之类的在线翻译了，太乱了。
不好意思，说话可能重了点，希望不要介意。

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