作业帮请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有语法错误!谢谢!
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请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有语法错误!谢谢!
请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有语法错误!谢谢!
请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有语法错误!谢谢!
This story reminds me one of my 【experiences】.Last month,I failed in 【an】exam,【instead of letting myself down】,I paid 【more】 attention to 【the reasons of】my failure.【I always get lessons from those failure experiences of my studying.】 【At last去掉】Finally,I 【improved myself and got successful】 【in the end.去掉】
【I quite agree with the writer’s idea because I think what he said are reasonable】.Failure is what often happens in our life.【The best way to treat it is facing them it】 directly instead of running away from the 【challenges】.
In my opinion,【failure】 can be valuable and helpful to you,because it can help you understand yourself more clearly.If you can make use of the lessons from failure,and try again and again,success will come to you sooner or later.As the saying goes,“Failure is the mother of success.” “No pains,no gains.”
最后一段建议所有第二人称改成第一人称
第一段的always 通常后面接一般现在时态，而且remind后面通常接of,that 等等，如果是在我脑海里，应该是用remain.还有第二段，有点重复