求大神帮忙看一下哪段英语表达更好要表达 这世界因为我们各不相同而如此美丽 的话We are different from others.The world will become so beautiful.还是Because we are different from others,so the world will become so be

求大神帮忙看一下哪段英语表达更好要表达 这世界因为我们各不相同而如此美丽 的话We are different from others.The world will become so beautiful.还是Because we are different from others,so the world will become so be
求大神帮忙看一下哪段英语表达更好
要表达 这世界因为我们各不相同而如此美丽 的话
We are different from others.The world will become so beautiful.
还是
Because we are different from others,so the world will become so beautiful.
哪个更好?

求大神帮忙看一下哪段英语表达更好要表达 这世界因为我们各不相同而如此美丽 的话We are different from others.The world will become so beautiful.还是Because we are different from others,so the world will become so be
Because we are different from others,so the world will become so beautiful.这是个错句的,不能加so.
我们和别人不同（应该是我们之间不相同吧：所以应该说：Because we are different from each other,)
We are different from others.The world will become so beautiful.
应该说：
We are different from each other.The world will become so beautiful.(这句话是中式英语,前者为一般现在时,后者为一般过去时,不太合适的）
我的译文：
It is the differences between us that make the world become so beautiful.
就是我们之间的不同使这个世界如果美丽.（强调句的）

都不太好.供参考
The world is beautiful because we are different from one another.

Because we are different from others, so the world will become so beautiful.更好
因为在有必要的时候加上连词,会使句子更出彩

Because we are different from others, the world will become so beautiful.

不要 so

• because,so是绝对不能连用的，这是中式英语了，而且你想一下，第二句里面的“so the world  will become so beautiful.”，一个句子里面出现两个“SO“这肯定是不规范的用法。如果实在无法适应，你也可以把so改为yet，意思是差不多的

，排除语法错误后，我觉得当然是第二更好啦，英语中的连贯通畅是很重要的，国外的表述都需要条理清晰，我认为第二句改为

• Because we are different from others,  the world  will become  more beautiful.更好，层次更清晰

how about: The world is more beautiful because we accept and respect our differences. 这个世界更美好，因为我们接受并尊重我们之间的分歧
suggestion: Both of your statements may be better if you don't use future tense but u...

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how about: The world is more beautiful because we accept and respect our differences. 这个世界更美好，因为我们接受并尊重我们之间的分歧
suggestion: Both of your statements may be better if you don't use future tense but use 'becomes' and no 'so'. Future tense in both cases can weaken your argument.
the second statement can be better if you don't use passive voice.

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